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Submitted: October 17, 2010
Image Size: 2.1 MB
Resolution: 3072×2048

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Make:PENTAX
Model:PENTAX K-x
Shutter Speed:1/25 second
Focal Length:50 mm
ISO Speed:400
Date Taken:Oct 8, 2010, 8:19:51 PM
Software:Picasa 3.0

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Photography / People & Portraits / Glamour Portraits

Model: Allison
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^3wyl Oct 19, 2010 Hobbyist Photographer

It's a small shame she's a bit blurry... and the quality doesn't feel as good as it can be, perhaps.

The lighting isn't bad, though, and the timing is wonderful. I really like how the black and white captures the atmosphere and the mood... it gives it quite a classic feel to it, although the stance and expression suggest that it belongs in Glamour?

I feel you could have moved the camera slightly more to the right... other than that, it's cool.

=alahay Oct 19, 2010

Thanks a lot for the comment,
I am surprised to read blurry, perhaps you are not referring to the eyes. I use an f/1.4 deliberately to liberate the rest of her body by the depth of field.

I guess you are right about the glamor, I just can't seem to draw the line properly between classics and other categories.

How would I benefit from moving the camera to the right? Does it make the subject slimmer in that case? Not sure I understand.

^3wyl Oct 20, 2010 Hobbyist Photographer

I mean just placing her to either the right side or left side a bit more so that there's more space to balance it out?

It's another way of looking at it.

=alahay Oct 20, 2010

Ahh, I see what you mean...so either center it or do the rule of third, no? Maybe you're right but it usually comes naturally to me

^3wyl Oct 21, 2010 Hobbyist Photographer

Mm-hmm.

Just experiment, I guess.

~ColubrineDeuce Oct 17, 2010 Professional Photographer

great portrait
shes a beauty!

=alahay Oct 19, 2010

she is beautiful and very natural, great photoshoot

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