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May 15, 2010
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PENTAX K-x
1/25 second
F/5.6
55 mm
200
May 9, 2010, 3:25:22 PM
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:iconalahay:
Model: Theodora

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^3wyl May 16, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
It's interesting how the cloth cuts across the frame, there. The colours contrast in a pretty cool way and her expression sets the atmosphere quite well, I feel.

I like how this one feels more... exact, in a way, than the other which feels more spontaneous. :nod:
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:iconalahay:
Thank you! Indeed this is more exact, harmonious, geometrical while the other is more spontaneous or natural.
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~Loriele May 15, 2010  Student General Artist
I love it! Very peek-o-boo :) the only minor adjustment I might make would be to have her place a hand on/in front of the cloth like she's slowly pushing it back. ^^; I don't know if it would work or not, but I'd like to see it. Still, great overall!
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:iconalahay:
Thank you!

I have one with a hand in front. I feel that the hand obtrusively breaks the harmony and simplicity of the piece.
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~Loriele May 16, 2010  Student General Artist
ahh, I see :nod:
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