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December 9, 2010
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PENTAX K-x
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Nov 6, 2010, 3:27:43 PM
K-x Ver 1.00
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^3wyl Dec 12, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww...

This is lovely!

I like how carefree she appears to be there. The wide smile and the brightness work together well to convey a great and light atmosphere overall. I think it's pretty cool how you've positioned the shot with the branch/trunk on the right side and the space around her as well.. .not too tight, but not too airy either, so that's a good balance there.

The flare seems to add more depth and ... I do feel as if a light vignette wouldn't hurt, but eh. :shrug:
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:iconalahay:
Thank you so much!

I am glad you like it as much as I do, the framing was not that tight initially but cropped it to show this shiny lively face of the model :)

I am not much of a vignettist :)
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:icon3wyl:
^3wyl Dec 13, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Ah, that's fair enough. I'll try and remember that. :nod:
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:iconphotoshopgirl29:
Another beautiful pic...
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~MMetalgRound Dec 10, 2010  Student Photographer
what a stunning smile! great shot!
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:iconalahay:
thanks a lot for the comment, really appreciated!
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~MMetalgRound Dec 11, 2010  Student Photographer
no prob dude!
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